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Not bad for a first attempt :)

A few questions seeing as you put it out there:

1) What is the relevance in describing her as a mum of one?

2) Does she acknowledge she bears some responsibility for not reading the searches properly and looking into it before spending the money?

Thanks.

1) I guess it was a personal touch to make the reader feel more sympathy for her. It also gives her a bit of background rather than just her name.

2) She hired solicitors to do the conveyancing. Quite how they didn't discover what was about to happen is anybody's guess.

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Pretty good. A story I'd found and written is on the front page of today's Nottingham Post. Much of it is edited, hence being a co-author, but the content is the same, the quotes are identical and I conducted the interview myself, and it's still great to be on the front page considering it's the first story I've done as part of my journalism Masters course.

 

Here's the story - http://www.nottinghampost.com/way/story-24077907-detail/story.html

 

Bloody expensive drive but she had all of the front wall and the backyard done at the same time which would've added to the cost.

They did that story way better in Hitchhiker's Guide.

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Saw a bloke with his wife and kid in town and he was wearing shorts, no socks and flip fllops......wtf?

I saw a guy walking around town with a crash helmet and water wings on a few months back.

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I once saw a fella who appeared to be on crack, wearing a very dirty onsie, the top half of which was tied around his waist, leaving his torso bare. He was dancing around waving his arms about and shouting in people's faces, he also had a shopping trolley full of random shit.

It was at this moment I knew, it was time to leave Leicester.

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You should've said hello pal.

  

I once saw a fella who appeared to be on crack, wearing a very dirty onsie, the top half of which was tied around his waist, leaving his torso bare. He was dancing around waving his arms about and shouting in people's faces, he also had a shopping trolley full of random shit.

It was at this moment I knew, it was time to leave Leicester.

Una reckons people say he is on crack........
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